I had a request to start a blog where you could weigh in on thoughts about a movie based on The Merchant of Death and to discuss casting. This isn’t to say that a movie is imminent. It isn’t. But I’m working with some folks to develop one now, so you never know. (Just don’t hold your breath!)
So, here’s the blog. Have fun.
Courtney Chetwynde says:
Ya second earth would make more sence
Courtney Chetwynde says:
Do you guys think its weird that im most comfortable when i have my guitar with me then. Without it?
Flume Surfer says:
Yeah, I said that at first but thought I could foreshadow a little that Shannon moved to First Earth. Bobby knew of something and told her to move there.
SilverMisty says:
Elli learned that John pretty much new these things
it’s knew…I know you could’ve made that mistake from rushing 🙂
That instead of this for “This disturbed Elli.”
Flume Surfer says:
🙂
SilverMisty says:
@Courtney: no. it’s like how some ppl feel comfortable around their fave book or stuffed animal.
GOCLORAL says:
Ch 4
“What’s going on Bobby?” asked Eli.
“Lifelight pyramid just collapsed. I’m either paranoid or right, but I have a feeling Saint Dane is involved.” Bobby replied.
“Uncle Bobby, what the hell is going on?”
“Ah, a new generation of Travelers. This will be quite interesting. So Pendragon, how was your summer?” asked the new commer.
They all turned around to face the newcomer.
“Cut the crap Saint Dane, now tell me what the hell is going on. I thought we finished you off years ago.”
That’s all I can think of at the moment. Give me a few minutes and all have some more to add
Flume Surfer says:
Awesome, thanks for helping me edit:)
SilverMisty says:
@Flume Surfer: for the foreshadow part, I don’t think that’s a good idea since it gets readers more confused…if you want to do that, you’d have to do some explaining about Bobby telling Shannon before.
Flume Surfer says:
@GOCLORAL
yeah, that’s an option for ch.4
I was going to do different though.
You know what, good idea GOCLORAL! Everyone should continue from there to get everone’s ideas together. Now THAT would make it a story
SilverMisty says:
@gocloral: newcomer
Flume Surfer says:
@SilverMisty
True. I read to much mystery books.
SilverMisty says:
Eventually, Lifelight was destroyed, and now, the pyramid has collapsed.
change has to had.
sorry…I pay attention to a lot of grammar.
Flume Surfer says:
R U sure?
GOCLORAL says:
Okay. Got it.
“Wow, I’m gone for a few years and no hello? I find that quite offensive.” Said saint Dane.
“That’s Saint Dane? Wow, I would have imagined him… Scarier.” John said to Bobby.
“Scarier?” Saint Dane turns to Bobby and says. “Have you not told this boy about the things I can do?”
Sorry. I can’t think at the moment. 4 out of my 5 siblings are screaming for no reason.
SilverMisty says:
addition to Ch. 4:
“Ah, but that’s what you thought, Pendragon.” Saint Dane said, his lips forming into a wicked smile. “The very same thought I had of you. Pity that things don’t turn out the way they were meant to be, am I right?”
Flume Surfer says:
Ha, that’s cool:)
John turns to Saint Dane and says, “You’re ugly.”
GOCLORAL says:
@ flume surfer
Okay. In laughing my butt off over here at that. Good idea. Better than mine
Batu Warrior says:
Wait what are we doing?
SilverMisty says:
“Really?” Saint Dane replies. “Haven’t you learned that you shouldn’t judge a book by its cover? Don’t underestimate me,boy.”
Flume Surfer says:
Saint Dane turns to John and screams, “Boy, that’s not the point! I’m about to take over Halla and make it mine!”
John replies, “Again? Looks to me that you already failed that. You should try winning in golf!”
SilverMisty says:
@Batu Warrior: making upa Ch.4 to Flame Surfer’s story.
Flume Surfer says:
@Batu Warrior
Go back a few comments to see the story.
SilverMisty says:
@Flame Surfer: are we doing my response for St. D or yours?
Batu Warrior says:
Ohhhhhh….. I love writing! 🙂
GOCLORAL says:
Lol flume surfer. I’ll be back in a little while. Im gonna try and work on chapter 4.
Flume Surfer says:
We are continuing it, all of us. Go ahead and add what ever you want, i’m not choosing ideas. That way, all of us can make one story! 🙂
GOCLORAL says:
I’ll try 2 or 3 different scenarios.
Flume Surfer says:
John turns to Saint Dane and sizes him up.
“Uncle Bobby, you had trouble…with this guy?”
Saint Dane just sneers.
“Um, you see John, this guy, well, yeah,” Bobby replies.
SilverMisty says:
@flume surfer: have to eat in a bit…but i’ll still do the ch.4 thing.
so…what do you mean by continuing? my answer w/calm st.d or yours with angry st.d?
Flume Surfer says:
Well, depends. I’m doing it to make some laughs. We could use yours if you want, I don’t mind.
Flume Surfer says:
I have to eat soon too. not now
SilverMisty says:
anyways…after st. dane just sneers, how about Bobby stayed silent, giving John a steely look.
SilverMisty says:
@flume surfer: do you wanna do 2 versions, 1 funny and 1 not?
SilverMisty says:
1 could be bloopers. 🙂
Flume Surfer says:
Yeah, Bobby’s look says, “Hey, don’t mess w/ this guy,” OR “Hey, you’re making me look like an idioi!!!!”
Flume Surfer says:
Are you writing this down?
SilverMisty says:
ok…2 it is?
SilverMisty says:
no. i’m not…sorry.
Flume Surfer says:
So you are writing it! Um, 1 is fine, the serious version. 🙂
Flume Surfer says:
oh
SilverMisty says:
no…i’m really not writing it! do you wanna write it? then we can send it to mr. machale?
SilverMisty says:
we can send serious version to him…or both?
GOCLORAL says:
I can do a funny version
SilverMisty says:
lunch break in a few sec…(for me)
Batu Warrior says:
I read the first three chapters, it’s pretty good. I’m good at writing like fan fiction like this.
SilverMisty says:
great gocloral! you do that and me and flume surfer can do serious 1 and we can send both to machale. 🙂
Flume Surfer says:
Good idea. um, I could write it and e-mail it to him saying it’s by Flume Surfer and SilverMisty
Flume Surfer says:
Good idea. um, I could write it and e-mail it to him saying it’s by Flume Surfer and SilverMisty.
GOCLORAL says:
Ok. I’m going to work on it right now.